Monday, 16 September 2013

Draft Piece of journalism by Nana Brako

 
This is my finished piece of journalism for XXL Magazine. Enjoy!!!
 
 

4 comments:

  1. The, header/title is very big and it is the first thing i see, it is very interesting how you entice us with your rhetorical question. The layout is good and very precise, the font and colour also stands out and is very eye popping, which will attract the audience very easily. i like the contrast between the white and red as it goes really well against the black background. However, the writing in italic is not very clear but still very attractive. I also like the pictures and subtexts as it goes really well with the text, it also shows good consistency.

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  2. The layout of your columns are very well structured also the aspects of italics when quoting is very realistic to a professional magazine also the content in the article is very interesting learning what many artists opinions are on the situation, in conclusion the article is very interesting.

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  3. I like the use of the color it brings out all the important parts. The layout is simple and easy to read because of the colors used against the black background. i like how you used a rhetorical question it allows the reader to really think about file sharing. However i feel like the article is really saturated you could maybe spread the writing to two pages.

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  4. The colour scheme is very good and the columns are well structured. There is a Good use of rhetorical question on the title The background colour goes very well with the colour of the text. There is also a good use of pictures as you have used primary and secondary images.However on one of the captions the font colour is barely visible, you should move the caption blow the picture like the other caption. Overall this is a very good article.SN

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